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poetry Appalachia

If you follow the speaker’s directions, you’ll be as lost as he is. Poet Peter Neil Carroll wonders what’s worth finding in this place that most Americans have forgotten.

The man at the river
with watery blue eyes tells
me how to find everything
he’s lost. Scratchy voiced, pointing
a crusty finger
like a needle knitting
through thickets,
he weaves the route:

First to Cousin Jack’s barn,
near the yard where the collie sleeps
and across a narrow bridge
by the broken white fence
where Dave’s truck flew off
leaving his Jeannie
and the two baby girls. Turn
at the gray-stone post office.
Can’t miss it. Just opposite
Frank’s busted Ford that needs a motor,
he’s waiting for the government check.
Now if you see the church, fresh-
painted white, you’ve gone too far.
Turn back in Sharon’s drive,
she don’t ever mind, her boys
left these parts years ago.

Stories hang there, ghost-sheets
over the depleted woods. I stop
in a clearing to look at leaves fluttering,
swirling off sycamore, hickory, oak—
the way a child turns back to wave—
the mountain stripped at the ridge.

Peter Neil Carroll, poet, activist and historian, died in September of 2024 after a short illness at the age of 80. He was one of the key individuals involved in founding the Abraham Lincoln Brigade Archives, and was also the long-time poetry moderator at Portside. From A Child Turns Back to Wave, The Poetry Press, http://www.americanpopularculture.com.

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